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This site has evolved from a doctoral research project
investigating the design of a computer tool that would help
children write more effective narratives, undertaken by Kate
Holdich, supervised by Professor Paul Chung, Department of
Computer Science, Loughborough University, U.K. It is provided
here for the benefit of parents, teachers and children. If you
have found it useful, please let us know.
Part of the research investigated models of writing. There is an enormous difference in the way mature and novice writers approach the task of narrative writing. Mature writers employ a range of literary techniques and revise their writing continually. Children have limited knowledge of narrative writing techniques and rarely revise. The research literature suggests that children will benefit from being guided through the process of reflecting about ideas, vocabulary and sentence constructions as they compose their narratives. In addition they require assistance with proof reading - identifying and correcting grammar weaknesses. Children also need to be made aware of the many features which contribute to the creation of successful stories, such as how to create an effective opening, or how to make characters seem realistic.
HARRY's interactive story writing tutorial aims to guide
children through the process of revision whilst explaining
literary techniques as and when they are appropriate.
HARRY's conversational approach was inspired by ELIZA,
the first computer system able to 'hold a turn-taking
conversation' with the user. ELIZA was named after
Eliza Doolittle in the play 'Pygmalion' by G.B. Shaw,
who learned to speak, but never became any smarter.
HARRY is named after Eliza's teacher, who was more knowledgeable
- and has evolved on this site into a writing wizard.
The CHECK TEXT facility is a separate tool which
indicates strengths and weaknesses in children's
written grammar and style. In time, HARRY may be
able to assess other important features of story
writing such as imaginative plot, convincing
characterisation, descriptive detail etc. For
now, this task must be performed by a human!
Several refereed academic journal papers have been published relating to the HARRY writing tool and CHECKTEXT analysis tool. Here are two Teacher Learning Academy case studies:
A computer tutor for story writing
Revising and editing with HARRY.
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