Story one is an example of a less well constructed story. Run your mouse over
the entire text in the text box opposite - to select it, and right click to
copy the text to your clipboard. Then paste the text into the utility for
checking grammar and style linked to here.
Take a look at the findings and the report.
You may wish to compare the result with story two and story three, which will open up in new windows for later copying and pasting.