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	Story one is an example of a less well constructed story. Run your mouse over the entire text in the text box opposite - to select it, and right click to copy the text to your clipboard. Then paste the text into the utility for checking grammar and style linked to here. Take a look at the findings and the report. You may wish to compare the result with story two and story three, which will open up in new windows for later copying and pasting.		Me and my best friend Rebecca were on are way to the Davidson's house to stay for two days with Emma and Donna. On are way we went past Farmer Jighles farm. Rebecca said "let's climb the fence and pick some apples from Farmer Jighles orchard." "No I said look at the sign" it said PRIVATE KEEP OUT. "So what said Rebecca I'm hungry "OK I said but don't blame me if we get told off. "We won't Rebecca said climbing up the fence Give me your hand and I'll help you up". I got up and we climbed a tree and eat an apple from it (Rebecca only) "Yuck this is sour" she said let's climb another tree. OK I said so we did. I sat on an over hanging bough. "UMM said Rebecca these are nice". Yes I said. Rebecca put lots of apples in her pockets I was just about to do the same when Rebecca shouted "LOOK OUT!" A bull dog was growling at the bottom of the tree. "Oh no." Rebecca said "Let's throw a stick." "YES." It didn't run after it. "What else can we do?" asked Rebecca. "Stay up the tree" I said "Good" Rebecca said so we did. The hours went by slowly Emma and Donna would be wondering where we were the dog was still at the bottom of the tree. He didn't fall asleep. Shhhhhhhh I whispered Oh no Rebecca said. It was Farmer Jighles……… "Here Donald " he called WOOF WOOF barked the dog. Farmer Jighles saw us "Get out of my site and never ever come back can't you read" he shouted. We got down the tree and ran to the fence with the dog close on our heels "HELP" Rebecca shouted. We got to the fence and climbed over. When our Mum found out we weren't allowed any sweets. WE'LL NEVER GO there again I said.

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