Story two is an example of a better constructed story than number one,
but not as good as story three. Run your mouse over
the entire text in the text box opposite - to select it, and right click to
copy the text to your clipboard. Then paste the text into the utility for
checking grammar and style linked to here.
Take a look at the findings and the report.
You may wish to compare the result with story one and story three, which will open up in new windows for later copying and pasting.